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December 5, 2011
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:iconeggie1978:
What can I say? Beautiful men inspire me. This time it was gorgeous British model Patrick "Paddy" Mitchell. I think he should be forever young, so I wrote this short story.

You can see my lovely muse here [link]

Story Summary: Lord Micah Angelus is a thousand-year-old vampire who is used to getting what he wants, but when he sets his sights on a nobleman's new bride, he knows it will be a challenge to make her his own. Loyal to her husband, Sybil Warrington rejects Micah's advances, but her secret desire for him proves stronger than her refusal.

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- Micah is pronounced "Mike-uh".
- Everything in the story is from my imagination.
- uaineoil milis means "gentle lamb" in Irish...or so the Google Translator says.
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Mood: Delighted *TanukiTagawa Apr 28, 2012
* Nice and romantic,with a vampire in classic style. 8-) The sole detail that surprise - And confuse ! - me were the Balthazarīs feathered black wings,instead bat wings. :O_o: But this doesnīt matter: Iīd like say that you did a very good work! :clap: P.S:I also use the Google to translate my works to English. :greetings:
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~eggie1978 Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't want to give Micah typical bat wings which are used in a lot of vampire mythology. I wanted to give him a different heritage and make him a descendant of a fallen angel. They typically have feathered wings. But I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :D

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Mood: Approval *TanukiTagawa Apr 29, 2012
- Really,you had a very original idea! :clap:
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Mood: Love ~AdmiralsGirl Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. I like how you completely kept it a secret what happened to Sybil afterwards, which leaves me the option of imagining it.
Your style of writing is very good, too. I found the part where he senses her ovulating a bit...strange. I know what you were trying to say (with women being the most attractive at that moment and all), but it feels like there might have been another way to say it? But this is the only thing I found I could criticise, so please don't worry about it too much! :)

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~eggie1978 Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I appreciate your feedback. I'm glad you liked the story. And thanks for making it a fave. :D I hope you get a chance to read my free novel, "The Howling Heart", if the summary sparks your interest.

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~AdmiralsGirl Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I almost forgot to put you on my watchlist! I'll do that right now. I need to read more! Unfortulately Uni has not been kind to me the last couple of years so I hardly touched any books beside the ones I had to read for my studies.

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~eggie1978 Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope you enjoy The Howling Heart if you read it. If you have time, please let me know your thoughts. Thanks for adding me to your watch list. :)

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Mood: Love ~s-w-e-e-p Jan 25, 2012
i really enjoyed this!!!!!!!!!!!!! nice work!!!!!!!!!
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~eggie1978 Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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~s-w-e-e-p Jan 26, 2012
Oh my gosh I really want to to add more or have a sequal to it!!!! =D
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